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1.
Amber flaming
Your eyes
Entrap me.

2.
Soft and pure skin, wild mane,
Wrapped around a sharp soul
Your tongue cuts deeper
Than my machete.
I like it!

3.
Such an absurd love it is!
You live to fight and destroy
I live to protect and treat.
I hope I'll never have to treat you,
my soldier.

4.
Opposite worlds
Are going to collide
And we are in the middle
Holding our hands.

5.
Autumn eyes
Tears like dew
Love hurts us.
For Poleepkwa Pride Day.
My first attempt writing haikus (just 1 and 5 are haiku actually) and very short poems, because I feel in the mood of short and incisive writings.

The first two poems talk about the first meet of Helen (a human who works for UIO and tries to help the aliens, she is the one with hazel eyes and long brown hair) with the quick-tempered Kiri (the blue alien with amber eyes who seems loving troubles). Here the story which talks about that episode 
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The other two poems talk about their relationship, which obviously is full of problems like in these episodes 
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And the last... well, this haiku talks about how this pair broke up, maybe forever. :(  
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I hope you'll like them! :heart:
I own my OCs concepts, but now District 9 aliens.
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non-nobis-domine Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
:aww: questi Haiku sono bellissimi!! Tutti splendidi ma i miei preferiti sono il 4 e il 5!! :faint: eri proprio ispirata...se riesco ad acchiappare il prossimo kiriban, magari stavolta ti chiederei una poesia, chissà! :heart::heart::heart:  
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IllyDragonfly Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
Ma che dolcina che sei! :glomp: Grazie mille, ci ho messo il cuore. Magari poi uso il 4 o il 5 in un disegno, sai come le locandine dei film con una quote del film.
Guarda che io accetto art trades, non è necessario aspettare i kiribans e i giveaways per avere cosucce gratis da me. ;)
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Kregl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
These are lovely poems, even though I have lost taste for poetry lately.
They may go better with simple illustrations to come along with the text.
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IllyDragonfly Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2014   Writer
Aaaaw, you managed to visit my gallery!!!! :glomp: And even read them, thank you!!!! Mhm... you mean an illustration for every poem? Because I felt a slight inspiration for number 2 and number 4, like posters.
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Kregl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, illustrations, like we see sometimes in web, where people put an text to some photo, trying to make it look and sound deep :D i think it could work.

And yes, I'm at home now
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IllyDragonfly Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
Aaah, got it, like the ones you see in the preview! I'm always a bit doubtful because they get shrunk and my works look terrible in a small format. But maybe I could add the original size work in a link, mhm... I'll think about it.
Hurrah, welcome back! I want to see maaaany photos!
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Kregl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nooo, you got it all wrong again :D
More like something i78.photobucket.com/albums/j99…

Thanks, I'll show none :D
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IllyDragonfly Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
Aaaaah, got it! It would be interesting, why not?
None??? Why?
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Kregl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because only you are interested and it's always a lot of work... and pretty much last year's photos repeat my time there
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IllyDragonfly Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
Aaw, okay! 
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